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Pouvez vous m'aidez pour mon anglais c'est un texte qu'on devait rédiger sur notre voyage et on devait le formuler au prétérit pouvez vous m'aider et essayer de corriger quelque petite erreurs s'il vous plaît :
March 7 I got up at 3am to joined my classe, at school we date at the parking to take the bus together at the Tripp, in the boat Iwas playing with my friend
We arrived at night to Cardiff a taxi bringed us at the family, the name of the family is James they're very nice
Every morning we went to the school words us English
At the Tuesday we had playing golf for me is the second time, and I love that
After golf, we have 2 hours to go to shopping is very nice
Wednesday we visited a mine of coal in Cardiff. It's very big but I don't like that
Thursday we visited the castle and the millennium stadium. In the castle I discovered a history of the castle. The millennium stadium it's very big and beautiful It's my favorite places, after we had 10 minutes for shopping is very short
On Friday, It's time to back home. And we took the ferry and the bus another time. When At night I arrived at home, I'm very tired to my week at Cardiff
Pouvez vous m'aidez pour mon anglais c'est un texte qu'on devait rédiger sur notre voyage et on devait le formuler au prétérit pouvez vous m'aider et essayer de corriger quelque petite erreurs s'il vous plaît :
March 7 I got up at 3am to joined my classe, at school we date at the parking to take the bus together at the Tripp, in the boat Iwas playing with my friend
We arrived at night to Cardiff a taxi bringed us at the family, the name of the family is James they're very nice
Every morning we went to the school words us English
At the Tuesday we had playing golf for me is the second time, and I love that
After golf, we have 2 hours to go to shopping is very nice
Wednesday we visited a mine of coal in Cardiff. It's very big but I don't like that
Thursday we visited the castle and the millennium stadium. In the castle I discovered a history of the castle. The millennium stadium it's very big and beautiful It's my favorite places, after we had 10 minutes for shopping is very short
On Friday, It's time to back home. And we took the ferry and the bus another time. When At night I arrived at home, I'm very tired to my week at Cardiff
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ligne 1 : we DATED
l3: a taxi BROUGHT us in our family.
l3: the name of tje family WAS
l4: they were
l6: On tuesdau, we played golf. It was the second time for me. And I loved that.
l7: we had 2 hours. It was very nice.
l8: ON wednesday
l9: it was very big and I didn't like..........
l11: it was very big....... It was my favorite place
l12: it was very short
l13: on friday, it was
l14: I was very tired.....
je crois que tu as oublié que ton texte devait être au passé!! bonne journée! :)
l3: a taxi BROUGHT us in our family.
l3: the name of tje family WAS
l4: they were
l6: On tuesdau, we played golf. It was the second time for me. And I loved that.
l7: we had 2 hours. It was very nice.
l8: ON wednesday
l9: it was very big and I didn't like..........
l11: it was very big....... It was my favorite place
l12: it was very short
l13: on friday, it was
l14: I was very tired.....
je crois que tu as oublié que ton texte devait être au passé!! bonne journée! :)